Re: a comment on FHjk by Dark Angle	14-Jul-07/1:43 PM
Too bad it took five years to reply to the comment. Old indeed.
Re: Ferris Wheel by alverland theme park	30-Sep-03/7:22 AM
I like the simplicity.
Re: a comment on Anouk by daniella	10-Jul-03/6:19 AM
That's fine. no need to be closed minded about some advice. I am offering you a response, pointing out that perhaps readers will misinterpret your intentions because of a lack of clarity. "bubbling up" is not a clear and concise description. So, asking me to believe what I want to believe is fine, but I beleive that this could be a better peom. Strive to go beyond the mediocre. give up some words.
Re: A Moment by nentwined	20-Jun-03/8:37 AM
too many syllables.Nice, but too many syllables.
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	20-Jun-03/5:42 AM
? I didn't know starfish ate cherries.
Re: I'm Not A Poet by JuddNelson	20-Jun-03/5:41 AM
Sonnets are a bitch. start with a rhyme scheme, abd go from there. check out www.sonnets.org
Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8	20-Jun-03/5:40 AM
I don't care that this is sacreligious, it is crap any way you look at it. nice job.
Re: Oh mother, thou art stoned! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Jun-03/5:39 AM
3 7 5
Re: Haiku: The Legend Continues by brazen	20-Jun-03/5:38 AM
T R I T E
Re: winter by w~* ATHENA *~w	20-Jun-03/5:36 AM
If you actually wrote this yourself, bravo. if not, then shame on you for defacating on art.
Re: Pointless tears by shwenatjadeflower	20-Jun-03/5:34 AM
strangely un-haiku like.
Re: Titanic by DespondentDotCom	20-Jun-03/5:33 AM
4 8 3 are you counting the title as part of 17 syllables?
Re: when you want your haiku to be cool but otherwise got it trashed because you are f*#ing limited by 5-7-5...and you think you can get away with it but end up getting criticized in the web by unknown	20-Jun-03/5:32 AM
the limitations are what force the discipline and that is the essence of the Haiku form--beauty through discipline. "sometimes an apparent constraint can serve to free the imagination" - Theodore Roethke
Re: Obsessions by Nicholas Jones	20-Jun-03/5:29 AM
I used to be in love with the trapezoid myself, until i discovered the tetrahedron.
Re: Greeny nature by chigurukala	20-Jun-03/5:20 AM
5 6 3 mekka lekka hi mekka heiny ho.
Re: Give me beer! by Agemo-Z	20-Jun-03/5:18 AM
DOes she look like your mom? If you are too drunk to tell, you probably don't want to bring that one home.
Re: Seven by Dangzter	20-Jun-03/5:15 AM
something like, "how are you doing?"
Re: Hot Potato by Shardik	20-Jun-03/5:14 AM
my neighbors are jews a 5 syllable last line for you.
Re: Advise by Audaciouslilgrl	13-Jun-03/9:09 AM
I have some advice for you. look at and rate a bunch more poems, learn a few things, read the "best" list and start over.
Re: a comment on Advise by Audaciouslilgrl	13-Jun-03/9:08 AM
ahh, the welcome wagon.