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Oh mother, thou art stoned! (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Wow I'm stoned Tried Nigerian lover Will you raise my child

Up the ladder: Alone
Down the ladder: witch's bliss

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.9
Weighted score: 5.45
Overall Rank: 2910
Posted: August 25, 2002 8:11 AM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2003 3:13 PM PDT
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[7] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.9 | 25-Aug-02/10:34 PM | Reply
Keeping with current events I see. But I like it.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ | 26-Aug-02/12:26 PM | Reply
Yes, i read as much media as the siberian wasteland will allow to reach me..it's cold, and there aren't enough lost children around here to eat. Yet.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 213.122.161.137 | 28-Aug-02/11:54 AM | Reply
not drugs again, he always talks about drugs. I thinks he's a pervayor of smelling salts to the big endian tenants of hampstead.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 213.122.161.137 | 28-Aug-02/12:05 PM | Reply
but wait, read again. Oh no you fool she has tricked you with her headsucking ways, tis not about drugs, tis bitting social comment, on the issues of the day.
Super. Don't you want more children baba. don't you need them to flavour your stoner soup. Lots of love D (see were on first letter terms now)
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > ==Doylum | 14-Sep-02/1:22 PM | Reply
Tis the stone that will splash soup in your eye! recoil viper. fondel the new yoke times. hug it deeped into foaming madness!
perv.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > ==Doylum | 19-Jun-03/3:14 PM | Reply
Kids---are expensive, and loud.
But yeah.
[n/a] little_big_nose @ 216.207.133.193 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 11-Jan-04/7:23 PM | Reply
Don't forget tasty
[9] Mr Pig (again) @ 195.92.168.164 | 19-Jun-03/3:38 PM | Reply
I'm drunk as a wasp.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > Mr Pig (again) | 19-Jun-03/4:09 PM | Reply
I bet.
[2] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.71.126 | 20-Jun-03/5:39 AM | Reply
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