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Alone (Free verse) by Lil_Chick_512
I'm sitting here alone
No one to talk to
Everyone is out
Or mad at me
I have no one
My life is so screwed up
I don't know what to do
Everything is messed up
And turning for the worse
I'm all alone
Alone
Crying
Dying
Hurting
Pain
All these feelings
I can't take them
Why won't they go away
They never leave me alone
And they're all I have
There's only one person
That I can talk to
Not even a person
It's a piece of paper
And this pencil
Alone
Crying
Dying
Hurting
Pain
I wish I had someone
A shoulder to cry on
But there's no one
Just me
This paper and pencil
Maybe I'd be happier
If I just died
Maybe I wouldn't be alone
Someone would talk to me
And actually care
Alone
Crying
Dying
Hurting
Pain
Pain is what I'm feeling
This knife is ending my life
I wish I didn't do it
There's so much I could have done
If I wasn't always alone
Maybe someone did care
And I just didn't know it
I might have lived
If I would have known
But I died
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.9
Weighted score: 5.45
Overall Rank: 2909
Posted: August 14, 2002 11:13 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 11:13 AM PDT
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