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Alone (Free verse) by Lil_Chick_512
I'm sitting here alone No one to talk to Everyone is out Or mad at me I have no one My life is so screwed up I don't know what to do Everything is messed up And turning for the worse I'm all alone Alone Crying Dying Hurting Pain All these feelings I can't take them Why won't they go away They never leave me alone And they're all I have There's only one person That I can talk to Not even a person It's a piece of paper And this pencil Alone Crying Dying Hurting Pain I wish I had someone A shoulder to cry on But there's no one Just me This paper and pencil Maybe I'd be happier If I just died Maybe I wouldn't be alone Someone would talk to me And actually care Alone Crying Dying Hurting Pain Pain is what I'm feeling This knife is ending my life I wish I didn't do it There's so much I could have done If I wasn't always alone Maybe someone did care And I just didn't know it I might have lived If I would have known But I died

Up the ladder: Easter (edited)
Down the ladder: Oh mother, thou art stoned!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.9
Weighted score: 5.45
Overall Rank: 2909
Posted: August 14, 2002 11:13 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 11:13 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 14-Aug-02/11:45 AM | Reply
and now, for your entertainment, a poem by the living dead.
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.10 | 14-Aug-02/11:48 AM | Reply
Geez, you say I'm mean. I left this "alone".
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 14-Aug-02/12:05 PM | Reply
she died at the end, p&k. who do you think wrote it?
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.10 | 14-Aug-02/12:18 PM | Reply
Holy crap, your are right. I didn't get that far. That is creepy. I now have goosebumps!
[7] titan69 @ 195.93.34.184 | 14-Aug-02/12:32 PM | Reply
like this one!
pain comes with looking back
and trying to live there.!!!!!!! GO FORWORD
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Aug-02/12:30 PM | Reply
of course they care, that's why you're still around to write this. i was kinda hoping for a little more graphic violence, i was expecting evil dead part 2, instead i got a hello kitty slumber party, and i was not even invited...i look great in drag especially with a steak knife and no friends........suicide.realism.sadism.shirt-tales.killer-whales.welcome back kotter lunch box...h
[9] savannah @ 32.101.160.12 | 14-Aug-02/4:19 PM | Reply
i like it, its intence and deep, a well writen poem in my opinion.
[10] Tarquin De La Bog @ 62.7.134.133 | 14-Aug-02/4:26 PM | Reply
This is basic, yet fantastic. 10. The best piece of work I've read on this site.
[2] ==Doylum @ 213.122.112.254 | 14-Aug-02/4:45 PM | Reply
I fed my cat raw liver this moring. Later, in the heat of the day, i went walking in the wonderous sunshine only to find a swam of flies around an amorphous blob. The flies appeared to be communing with nature, their buzzing created an intensity i had rarely known. All because my cat can't stomach raw liver. My cat, even on an off day like today, is more creative than you.
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