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Alone (Free verse) by Lil_Chick_512

I'm sitting here alone No one to talk to Everyone is out Or mad at me I have no one My life is so screwed up I don't know what to do Everything is messed up And turning for the worse I'm all alone Alone Crying Dying Hurting Pain All these feelings I can't take them Why won't they go away They never leave me alone And they're all I have There's only one person That I can talk to Not even a person It's a piece of paper And this pencil Alone Crying Dying Hurting Pain I wish I had someone A shoulder to cry on But there's no one Just me This paper and pencil Maybe I'd be happier If I just died Maybe I wouldn't be alone Someone would talk to me And actually care Alone Crying Dying Hurting Pain Pain is what I'm feeling This knife is ending my life I wish I didn't do it There's so much I could have done If I wasn't always alone Maybe someone did care And I just didn't know it I might have lived If I would have known But I died

horus8 14-Aug-02/12:30 PM
of course they care, that's why you're still around to write this. i was kinda hoping for a little more graphic violence, i was expecting evil dead part 2, instead i got a hello kitty slumber party, and i was not even invited...i look great in drag especially with a steak knife and no friends........suicide.realism.sadism.shirt-tales.killer-whales.welcome back kotter lunch box...h




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