Greeny nature

by chigurukala

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Mar 2002 · 4 comments

In hamlet green farm Shaking head to cool breeze As green waves. ....Bollimuntha venkata ramana

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[n/a] nentwined 5-Apr-02/5:41 PM Reply

I'm afraid I don't get this at all. Each of the lines I can take individually, and I suppose there's a single image presented, but the image doesn't do anything for me... I don't understand why I'm being presented the image, if I'm supposed to take meaning from it or enjoy it or... [I don't find beauty in it to enjoy...]

[2] necroscope7 10-Jun-02/11:55 AM Reply

Main complaint here is haiku should be 5,7,5 you have
5,6,3. Although I could be wrong. I'm not counting that last line because I'm not certain what it is, is it actually part of the poem, or something else?

[3] Reuben Spiteri 7-Oct-02/9:22 PM Reply

sorry i don't get this

[5] Robert K Foster 20-Jun-03/5:20 AM Reply

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mekka lekka hi mekka heiny ho.