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I Love You, My Angel (Free verse) by mytenderrage
I feel the love bursting in my heart Like nothing I have ever felt before. On my bed, I dream of you Very happy, when I feel your love, Even when I can???t see your face. Your touch, your embrace, Only you can make me feel this way Until the end of all eternity. My delight and pleasure soars as Your arms wrap around my figure. Are you all mine, my angel? No one else can touch you Great feelings of passion Ever so soaring within my heart, Love, desire, and happiness.

Up the ladder: Greeny nature
Down the ladder: If I Could

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 3.6666667
Overall Rank: 13561
Posted: November 4, 2002 1:47 AM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2002 1:47 AM PST
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Comments:
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.20 | 4-Nov-02/7:43 AM | Reply
I see the pimple poems are still alive and well in my absence.
[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > poetandknowit | 4-Nov-02/11:49 AM | Reply
as if they'll ever go away.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.53 | 4-Nov-02/1:12 PM | Reply
again, the word "pukeypoo" comes to mind.
[0] god'swife @ 209.179.210.138 | 4-Nov-02/5:00 PM | Reply
You must be a masochist. I hate you/I love you/ I hate you/I love you. You could be a saddist. In which case touche! You have caused me incalculable nausea.
[n/a] snacktime @ 66.185.84.69 | 4-Nov-02/6:36 PM | Reply
wow, the treacle is making me vomit
congratulations
[0] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.88 | 5-Nov-02/11:46 AM | Reply
'Your arms wrap around my FIGURE'? Even by the standards of pimple poetry, that's bad.
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