Replying to a comment on:

Greeny nature (Haiku) by chigurukala

In hamlet green farm Shaking head to cool breeze As green waves. ....Bollimuntha venkata ramana

necroscope7 10-Jun-02/11:55 AM
Main complaint here is haiku should be 5,7,5 you have
5,6,3. Although I could be wrong. I'm not counting that last line because I'm not certain what it is, is it actually part of the poem, or something else?




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001