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Greeny nature (Haiku) by chigurukala

In hamlet green farm Shaking head to cool breeze As green waves. ....Bollimuntha venkata ramana

nentwined 5-Apr-02/5:41 PM
I'm afraid I don't get this at all. Each of the lines I can take individually, and I suppose there's a single image presented, but the image doesn't do anything for me... I don't understand why I'm being presented the image, if I'm supposed to take meaning from it or enjoy it or... [I don't find beauty in it to enjoy...]




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