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Ferris Wheel

by alverland theme park

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

Ferris wheel rides up, I look to the ground to find I’ll only return. If only to stay, Suspended in the bright sky, And stay, rocking slow. But I know it ends, And I will return back down, Resume existence

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[n/a] deleted user 29-Sep-03/3:35 PM Reply
not bad, alverland
[8] Robert K Foster 30-Sep-03/7:22 AM Reply
I like the simplicity.
[10] jesslew 13-Mar-07/7:15 PM Reply
i really like this
very REAL