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Ferris Wheel (Haiku) by alverland theme park Ferris wheel rides up,
I look to the ground to find
Iâll only return.
If only to stay,
Suspended in the bright sky,
And stay, rocking slow.
But I know it ends,
And I will return back down,
Resume existence
Up the ladder:
Hansel & Gretel
Down the ladder:
A Distracting Fistful of Haiku
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Posted: September 29, 2003 2:58 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2003 2:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.638736 Overall Rank: 2143 Comments:
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29-Sep-03/3:35 PM
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not bad, alverland
I like the simplicity.
i really like this
very REAL 219 view(s)
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