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Give me beer! (Haiku) by Agemo-Z
Give me more damn beer! Tell ME that I've had too much... Who ARE you, my MOM?

Up the ladder: Luicidity
Down the ladder: flight

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.878157
Overall Rank: 10308
Posted: August 4, 2002 10:51 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 10:51 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Aug-02/10:36 PM | Reply
No. I am not. i am the mochery of cockery that will make you the "star" of part 7. in the primal fable "the plains of africa" i wont make you the baboon like da. but if your fictionally pleasant to me..i might make you a wild pig with a double 'hoof'. ohhhhhhhhh.ahhhhhhhhh.silence.pickles don't grow on trees.beg.4.ure."fairy bouncing" underling.toaDIE.minionite! nice haiku. Bachus told me he wrote swastika just-4-u! grom! your lucky i'm drinking a newcastle right now. it might of saved you an exorcism feeg
[n/a] Agemo-Z @ | 5-Aug-02/10:41 PM | Reply
Uhmm.... I'm... Honoured? (And it's okay for me to spell "honour" with a "u", I'm Canadian, using the Queen's English)
[3] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.224 | 19-Aug-02/11:27 PM | Reply
I am quite fond of beer, but not this little ditty.
[4] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.71.126 | 20-Jun-03/5:18 AM | Reply
DOes she look like your mom? If you are too drunk to tell, you probably don't want to bring that one home.
[7] hipster flare @ 209.68.66.187 | 29-Sep-03/10:54 AM | Reply
certainly not MY mom. She's already drunk today.
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