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Pointless tears (Haiku) by shwenatjadeflower
These often shed tears Create a pool at my feet The world is flooded With my pain-filled tears They drown all the happiness That there ever was Suddenly I laugh These tears mean nothing-nothing They are meaningless It's been a bad day I hear the birds chirping now They were there before I just could not hear For my sadness enveloped me But now I see, there Is no point in misery 'Cause life is meant to be lived You never know what Card Life will hand you You can cry when you are dead Cry when you are dead.

Up the ladder: Adolescence
Down the ladder: What if ?

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11718
Posted: August 24, 2002 7:53 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2002 7:53 PM PDT
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[2] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.71.126 | 20-Jun-03/5:34 AM | Reply
strangely un-haiku like.
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