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Haiku № 11198

Pointless tears

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

These often shed tears Create a pool at my feet The world is flooded With my pain-filled tears They drown all the happiness That there ever was Suddenly I laugh These tears mean nothing-nothing They are meaningless It's been a bad day I hear the birds chirping now They were there before I just could not hear For my sadness enveloped me But now I see, there Is no point in misery 'Cause life is meant to be lived You never know what Card Life will hand you You can cry when you are dead Cry when you are dead.

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[2] Robert K Foster 20-Jun-03/5:34 AM Reply
strangely un-haiku like.