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Free verse № 17996

What if ?

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

What if this is all there is, what if its all a game, and we are all players, in the game of life, of an extraordinary something, which we can not begin to contemplate. What if the universe, that we consider so vast, is just a pea in a pod, among hundreds of pods, in the garden of a small-holding, within the smallest part of the tiniest corner, of some land that is a miniscule region, of a country within a space that is not there, at all.

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[3] Tintagiles 30-Oct-02/8:42 PM Reply
Then there is no point in your writing poetry.