Haiku № 5856

Fire (a haiku series)

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Sparks spiral upward Burning a dance on the night Cousins to the stars Hypnotic dancers Twine in sinuous rhythms Bright flames sway and die Coals glow on gray ash A fierce dragon-belly red Start to dim and fade

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[7] horus8 23-Jul-02/5:55 PM Reply

I'm not much of a haiku evalu-ater, but i likes this one. i likes mines rawwwww....a

[9] nentwined 11-Aug-02/7:06 PM Reply

I like the progression. I think historically haiku were supposed to be twinned with renga's to do something like this. (or something like that -- what do I know? :) I do like this.

[10] Robert K Foster 17-Sep-02/7:10 AM Reply

excellent.