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My Life as a Book

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

My life is a book tattered pages bound by a string of frayed ends, Stained with the stigma from spastic ink-spill But you read it so eagerly so amorously, like a child with newfound treasure, as if some value actually existed within these mangled pages You held up a mirror to show me the beauty I possessed, the beauty I never saw, a rarefied reflection in your eyes But perhaps I never saw this beauty because it was never there and only began to shine, the dwarf star metamorphosing into the supernova, the day you first kissed me.

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[6] Sigh'ense... 30-Jul-02/6:47 PM Reply
I'd love to secretly read your diary...--smile-- conjuctively uprising and amusing...
says Da1 w/ lip gloss handy.
[9] horus8 30-Jul-02/7:29 PM Reply
Fix your second to last line to find true love...naw..just joshuaing.. this is very soft against my mind i can give it the 'hoof' u have passed.the beak is yours. spearmint.horn.sender.rustic.pufferfishn
[7] ifni 10-Aug-02/9:28 PM Reply
clear imagery, good encapsulation of the moment. =)