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Fire (a haiku series)
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eviltwin
Sparks spiral upward Burning a dance on the night Cousins to the stars Hypnotic dancers Twine in sinuous rhythms Bright flames sway and die Coals glow on gray ash A fierce dragon-belly red Start to dim and fade
horus8
23-Jul-02/5:55 PM
I'm not much of a haiku evalu-ater, but i likes this one. i likes mines rawwwww....a
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