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Fire (a haiku series) (Haiku) by eviltwin

Sparks spiral upward Burning a dance on the night Cousins to the stars Hypnotic dancers Twine in sinuous rhythms Bright flames sway and die Coals glow on gray ash A fierce dragon-belly red Start to dim and fade

nentwined 11-Aug-02/7:06 PM
I like the progression. I think historically haiku were supposed to be twinned with renga's to do something like this. (or something like that -- what do I know? :) I do like this.




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