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Hamptons (Haiku) by bondjedi Ms. Stewart, fine girl
she gives financial advice
then makes a big cake
Up the ladder:
My Hidden Love for You
Down the ladder:
The Deep Blue
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Posted: August 14, 2002 4:25 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 1:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9284782 Overall Rank: 9310 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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14-Aug-02/7:21 PM
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god isn't that the truth...to see the further adventures of ms.stewart read my poem black liqourice & g-stringed orphans...lovely tale ..and this is a poignant haiku,good for you 8/10o
5-7-7 -- interesting (but possibly unnecessary) variation...
But there's only 5 in the last line?
Sounds like my kind of girl
Very nice!
It took me a very, very long time to get this.
Though wasn't the deal she _accepted_ financial advice that she shouldn't have? As opposed to giving it? 149 view(s)
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