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Free verse № 9794

The Deep Blue

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Aug 2002 · 0 comments

The blue so deep so full of life Without this beauty there would be strife To find this realm of magnificent sight Look high above the elegant bite In this blue the stars do dwell Sparkling, Dancing I can see them well When I stare into this amazing space I feel warmth against my rough and barren face It delivers hope to the heart so weak And peace to the soul so it can speak It tells of a place to stop the cries Just take a look deep into her eyes

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