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The Deep Blue (Free verse) by no9schmack
The blue so deep so full of life Without this beauty there would be strife To find this realm of magnificent sight Look high above the elegant bite In this blue the stars do dwell Sparkling, Dancing I can see them well When I stare into this amazing space I feel warmth against my rough and barren face It delivers hope to the heart so weak And peace to the soul so it can speak It tells of a place to stop the cries Just take a look deep into her eyes

Up the ladder: Hamptons
Down the ladder: the toxic noise

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9316
Posted: August 18, 2002 8:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2002 8:07 PM PDT
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