poemranker ::20 most recent comments by dragonfly (21-40) and replies

Comments bydragonfly, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus 11 Dec 2003, 1:20 PM
I noticed that as well. The poem reads beautifully up to this point. The line "And Dad I will not look away" is a great way to end it.
on She is A Lover Deep Within by Joe-joe 11 Dec 2003, 1:13 PM
cutesies
on Tsunami Love by The_Third_Isis 9 Dec 2003, 3:26 PM
A lot of beautiful imagery here.
on Angelic Fornication by The_Third_Isis 9 Dec 2003, 3:22 PM
I was wearing the same outfit during my visit to Buenaventura.F
on Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis 9 Dec 2003, 3:18 PM
*is speechless*
replying on The Morning Star by Shardik 9 Dec 2003, 3:01 PM
Would you like to hear me decline your offer?û
on Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003 8 Dec 2003, 10:08 PM
I think subtlety could improve its effect.
on Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer 8 Dec 2003, 10:01 PM
I met these two people.
on The Morning Star by Shardik 8 Dec 2003, 9:57 PM
Hmm...if it's well past 2, then it's not really a midnight drive. A 9 nonetheless!
on Thankless by shadowaura 7 Dec 2003, 11:59 PM
Mirrors are too often used. Maybe he saw his reflection in something else? Toilet water perhaps?
on xxxmas by kingit 5 Dec 2003, 11:17 PM
I agree with richa...it starts off great, but you get more crude and less fun at the end.
on For Brianna by MaliqaTara 2 Dec 2003, 4:11 PM
I'm sorry for your loss. This was a really touching poem.
on An early apology to the Hiltons by Shardik 2 Dec 2003, 4:00 PM
I've made better homemade porn than Paris. Wanna see?‚
on . by Bobjim 2 Dec 2003, 3:57 PM
yeast infection?
replying on 10-72 by dragonfly 22 Nov 2003, 11:21 PM
lol glad ya think so...i dont = ]
on Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz 17 Nov 2003, 11:02 PM
I have serious halitosis in the mornings. I brush many times a day though to stay minty fresh!
replying on Good Riddance by dragonfly 15 Nov 2003, 8:01 AM
no.
replying on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly 9 Nov 2003, 9:47 PM
lol...my tv dinners are always microwaveable
on Giving up on Coke by Katzclear 9 Nov 2003, 9:30 PM
Does mountain dew really lower sperm count? Or was that just an urban legend?
replying on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly 7 Nov 2003, 9:35 PM
ya know...i never thought of "hyperballad" when I wrote this. The church is around the corner and the mountain is literaly 2 blocks away. Don't worry. I can't somersault.