Re: a comment on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus	11-Dec-03/1:20 PM
I noticed that as well. The poem reads beautifully up to this point. The line "And Dad I will not look away" is a great way to end it.
Re: She is A Lover Deep Within by Joe-joe	11-Dec-03/1:13 PM
cutesies
Re: Tsunami Love by The_Third_Isis	9-Dec-03/3:26 PM
A lot of beautiful imagery here.
Re: Angelic Fornication by The_Third_Isis	9-Dec-03/3:22 PM
I was wearing the same outfit during my visit to Buenaventura.F
Re: Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis	9-Dec-03/3:18 PM
*is speechless*
Re: a comment on The Morning Star by Shardik	9-Dec-03/3:01 PM
Would you like to hear me decline your offer?û
Re: Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003	8-Dec-03/10:08 PM
I think subtlety could improve its effect.
Re: Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer	8-Dec-03/10:01 PM
I met these two people.
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik	8-Dec-03/9:57 PM
Hmm...if it's well past 2, then it's not really a midnight drive. A 9 nonetheless!
Re: Thankless by shadowaura	7-Dec-03/11:59 PM
Mirrors are too often used. Maybe he saw his reflection in something else? Toilet water perhaps?
Re: xxxmas by kingit	5-Dec-03/11:17 PM
I agree with richa...it starts off great, but you get more crude and less fun at the end.
Re: For Brianna by MaliqaTara	2-Dec-03/4:11 PM
I'm sorry for your loss. This was a really touching poem.
Re: An early apology to the Hiltons by Shardik	2-Dec-03/4:00 PM
I've made better homemade porn than Paris. Wanna see?‚
Re: . by Bobjim	2-Dec-03/3:57 PM
yeast infection?
Re: a comment on 10-72 by dragonfly	22-Nov-03/11:21 PM
lol glad ya think so...i dont = ]
Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz	17-Nov-03/11:02 PM
I have serious halitosis in the mornings. I brush many times a day though to stay minty fresh!
Re: a comment on Good Riddance by dragonfly	15-Nov-03/8:01 AM
no.
Re: a comment on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly	9-Nov-03/9:47 PM
lol...my tv dinners are always microwaveable
Re: Giving up on Coke by Katzclear	9-Nov-03/9:30 PM
Does mountain dew really lower sperm count? Or was that just an urban legend?
Re: a comment on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly	7-Nov-03/9:35 PM
ya know...i never thought of "hyperballad" when I wrote this. The church is around the corner and the mountain is literaly 2 blocks away. Don't worry. I can't somersault.