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Giving up on Coke

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Nov 2003 · 6 comments

When doubt or sorrow filled my mind t'was you I'd always abide in Your caffiene and sugar was so kind Find myself running around and laughing I remember all the good times we shared You helped me through my trial To you no friend would ever compare To help you were always prepared But lately its just never the same I drink but nothing changes I think my body's gotten used to your claim No more of my coke-inflicted mood ranges Why aren't you helping me? Your caffienes gone weak! Your sugar's my plea But your future looks bleak If this is the way you're going to act And you are no longer to help me Then coca-cola.. you're in the sack.. IM GOIN TO BUY SOME PEPSI!

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[10] sliver 9-Nov-03/10:05 AM Reply
Ever tried Jolt? That aughta get er
[n/a] Katzclear › sliver 9-Nov-03/10:12 AM Reply
LOL actually I haven't! Good idea... hehe
[7] dragonfly 9-Nov-03/9:30 PM Reply
Does mountain dew really lower sperm count? Or was that just an urban legend?
[9] NoSage 10-Nov-03/5:53 PM Reply
Soda gives you zits, try something else.
[n/a] Katzclear › NoSage 10-Nov-03/6:17 PM Reply
I've heard that... but I read that it isn't true. Stress is what gives u zits.
[9] NoSage › Katzclear 10-Nov-03/6:21 PM Reply
If that were the case I would be in a serious dilemma.