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Giving up on Coke (Free verse) by Katzclear

When doubt or sorrow filled my mind t'was you I'd always abide in Your caffiene and sugar was so kind Find myself running around and laughing I remember all the good times we shared You helped me through my trial To you no friend would ever compare To help you were always prepared But lately its just never the same I drink but nothing changes I think my body's gotten used to your claim No more of my coke-inflicted mood ranges Why aren't you helping me? Your caffienes gone weak! Your sugar's my plea But your future looks bleak If this is the way you're going to act And you are no longer to help me Then coca-cola.. you're in the sack.. IM GOIN TO BUY SOME PEPSI!

sliver 9-Nov-03/10:05 AM
Ever tried Jolt? That aughta get er




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