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xxxmas

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Dec 2003 · 7 comments

Anger steeping Angels weeping Santa's clause this year is keeping flea-rid reindeer will not feign cheer elves & Mrs.Claus be slain, dear Hang your Holly bang your Molly joyful! blissful! fistful jolly! Eggnog, rum & rum & rum & rum & rum & redrum more red, in fact than the fat hippies suit... celebrate! spread the cheer! & spread her legs keep far from mind us drunken & depress-ed dregs lest, you become the larvae of our hatch-ed hatred Eggs

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[8] richa 4-Dec-03/9:28 AM Reply

cute word play, the last five lines of the first verse seem to lose the way though.

[n/a] kingit 4-Dec-03/1:43 PM Reply

Yeah but, see how I pick IT up in the 2nd stanza, eh?

[7] Shardik 5-Dec-03/7:20 PM Reply

Picks up towards the end, thankfully.

[8] Shuushin 5-Dec-03/7:31 PM Reply

excerrent up to "Eggnog" - its the stacato rum that breaks it.

the last stanza... first two lines, fine. The rest - would go nice in a diff. piece methinks.

[7] dragonfly 5-Dec-03/11:17 PM Reply

I agree with richa...it starts off great, but you get more crude and less fun at the end.

[n/a] kingit 6-Dec-03/8:35 AM Reply

crude= fun for some. Thanks, you've all given me a valuable lesson here.

[9] The_Third_Isis 6-Dec-03/8:24 PM Reply

are magotts larvae..are silk worms larvae? well dunno im sooo happpy now i can swimm to key largo and drag J.Mannings chewed up corpus delictai.. and not feel the weight of hes deer punctured ass.Cheers to you i will drink to that xmas mess an happy new year..got's to go and dance, my sexy smooth, stand up and take notice, peachy clean untouched ass till the brake of dawn and then some. & I will kick your's Manning from one side of the missi to honolulu! I"ll drink to that..
in company of my friends who are waiting on you santa's lil helpers...come on down.