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xxxmas (Free verse) by kingit

Anger steeping Angels weeping Santa's clause this year is keeping flea-rid reindeer will not feign cheer elves & Mrs.Claus be slain, dear Hang your Holly bang your Molly joyful! blissful! fistful jolly! Eggnog, rum & rum & rum & rum & rum & redrum more red, in fact than the fat hippies suit... celebrate! spread the cheer! & spread her legs keep far from mind us drunken & depress-ed dregs lest, you become the larvae of our hatch-ed hatred Eggs

richa 4-Dec-03/9:28 AM
cute word play, the last five lines of the first verse seem to lose the way though.




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