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Thankless (Free verse) by shadowaura Sketch me your pain;
I'll draw a breath.
Tell me how
all you have left
is nothingness.
And I'll step away
from the mirror.
(You hold so much.)
Up the ladder:
Body & Earth
Down the ladder:
YOUR OWN PLEASURE
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Posted: December 6, 2003 9:10 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2003 9:10 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2591 Comments:
I liked it.
You can do better things with mirrors..get your lover in on it {smile}all you have left is a mess but if you love him lick it of..then use windex on that mirror happy is a great state of mind, at least for 10 minutes
merry xmas.a 8
Mirrors are too often used. Maybe he saw his reflection in something else? Toilet water perhaps?
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This one is fairly lucid though, like the little rhymes.