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Thankless (Free verse) by shadowaura

Sketch me your pain; I'll draw a breath. Tell me how all you have left is nothingness. And I'll step away from the mirror. (You hold so much.)

richa 6-Dec-03/10:07 AM
too many poems about seeing yourself in the mirror, no fresh insights here.

This one is fairly lucid though, like the little rhymes.




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