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Angelic Fornication (Free verse) by The_Third_Isis She attended Sacred Hearts of
Jesus' Catholic school in Bogotá.
Knee high socks, pleated skirt,
with a white tight Polo shirt.
All girlsâ school was hell on earth.
She prayed in every direction for an
Angel to guard her and keep her safe
From herself, and the others.
Outside her window was Mt. Seratte.
The highest peak on that side of the Andes.
"100 hail Maryâs,â said father Del Vechio,
when she said "cono" for the first time.
In another country she had a partial
immaculate conception.
She was in love with the fallen.
An angel absolutely perfect.
I'd give him an eight forever.
the first time it was sublime,
deep, almost painful.
Desire and the sweetest sweat.
She said "cono" a 100 more times
as he copulated.
No hail Marys.
Angel moans,
as she digs into divine flesh.
No remorse.
Just a heart that bleeds
forever more.
No longer mine.
No longer yours.
Up the ladder:
Federales
Down the ladder:
the meeting
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Posted: September 13, 2003 10:08 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2003 10:08 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.630823 Overall Rank: 581 Comments:
some loves angel trumpet=;/>
emmkay... 3char1per 8.
Very nice. It says a lot but drags or something at the end. Maybe take out the last two lines? Here's a 9 none the less.
do even know what "Angelic Fornication" means,
if you did then the poem would make more sense to you. you should be called the brainless. 3char1per just kidn
Well, what can I say. Hmm...She sounds really tasty, what with the socks, the skirt, etc. That alone deserves a 10.
Bravo religius delirium at its best I for twoo minutos closed my eyes and salivated at the tought of such union,,,i need another mia culpa and ten lashes for my own desires, Ive slipped into a very aroused state dios mio...MACHETE
I was wearing the same outfit during my visit to Buenaventura.F
This moved me. I felt the pain.
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