| Re: Offence by Stephen Robins |
10-Feb-04/9:14 PM |
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| Re: Belabourin' Jack by middenHeap |
2-Jan-04/1:07 PM |
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Reading this made me cup my balls...I enjoyed it
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| Re: a comment on New Leaf by dragonfly |
2-Jan-04/12:56 PM |
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hehe, i guess the metaphor didnt come through well. I was trying to use the image of a tree turning a new leaf as a symbol for a change within a person.
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| Re: a comment on New Leaf by dragonfly |
2-Jan-04/11:01 AM |
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Thanks for the comment. I wanted to capture that feeling of "willing vulnerability," as you put it. It's incredible how much a person can change once they find someone who is right for them. The moment when other people began to notice the glow in my face served as the inspiration to write this.
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| Re: The Fire of My Mind by RubyDragonKnight |
1-Jan-04/10:55 PM |
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| Re: Weep In Me by blueyes |
29-Dec-03/7:22 PM |
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make sure you weep with a condom on!
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| Re: It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
24-Dec-03/11:04 PM |
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ha! what a dork. Not God, you. -8-
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| Re: My friend over there (the Mirror) by reo316 |
23-Dec-03/11:49 PM |
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I really like how you worded your last two lines. Solid work.
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| Re: Little Bird by Blindpoetry |
21-Dec-03/7:36 PM |
Oh, Little Bird
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
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| Re: a comment on A Rainy Afternoon by dragonfly |
15-Dec-03/11:45 PM |
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What a coincidence. I think so too. =P
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| Re: Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
13-Dec-03/8:15 PM |
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"buying your wife another diamond ring." What the hell does she need another one for!? I know diamonds are a girl's best friend but she should be content already with the wedding ring.
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| Re: a comment on Use Me by dragonfly |
12-Dec-03/10:33 PM |
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I see what you mean. I think I'll work on it when I get in another bad mood.
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| Re: What I really needed by Shardik |
12-Dec-03/10:10 PM |
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| Re: diamond of love by crwncka1 |
12-Dec-03/10:07 PM |
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| Re: Without you by Luv2write |
12-Dec-03/10:06 PM |
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I don't think you mention "the light" enough times.
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| Re: Let Go by PunkyPanda |
11-Dec-03/3:54 PM |
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Well this is definitely better than your last piece. I totally know how it feels to want someone so bad even though you are fully aware they could care less. Still, it seems like a rant. Your ellipses is missing a third dot...
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| Re: Hurt by PunkyPanda |
11-Dec-03/3:47 PM |
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0_o I'm lost. Ok, so you hurt someone and you feel guilty about it. BUT, the sight of them being happy makes you want to die?
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| Re: a comment on Use Me by dragonfly |
11-Dec-03/3:44 PM |
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You know you'll be singing it in the shower. = P
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| Re: Preserves for the basement (Poe Poetry) by Bachus |
11-Dec-03/1:46 PM |
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| Re: The Spirit Of Giving by Miggy |
11-Dec-03/1:39 PM |
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