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Let Go

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Dec 2003 · 9 comments

I'm so afraid to wake up and have everything gone. I don't want to lose more than I've already lost. How can I get to you when you're so far away? All I want to do is fuckin' die everytime I cry cuz you can't save me from the cold..this is getting to fuckin' old! All I want you to see is you've become a fuckin' part of me and I can't let go...but you'll never know, and I know you don't give a fuck, I might as well give it all up..just go..let go of me..and go.

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[10] nothingtoanyone 11-Dec-03/11:50 AM Reply

And what do you Know, another good one lol.

[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Dec-03/2:39 PM Reply

That's about as punk rock as a warm lemonade slurpee.

[n/a] PunkyPanda 11-Dec-03/3:00 PM Reply

I appreciate all of your comments...Audrey, Lol. But as far as "Baby Yaga" do I sense sarcasm?

[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> › PunkyPanda 11-Dec-03/3:28 PM Reply

Yes, I don't want you to die. I want you to get naked and cook me a god damn omelette.

[6] dragonfly 11-Dec-03/3:54 PM Reply

Well this is definitely better than your last piece. I totally know how it feels to want someone so bad even though you are fully aware they could care less. Still, it seems like a rant. Your ellipses is missing a third dot...

[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 11-Dec-03/5:15 PM Reply

You need a fuckin' heater, man.

[n/a] Shardik › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 12-Dec-03/2:06 AM Reply

lol. and a kilt with an anti pattern.

[n/a] PunkyPanda 12-Dec-03/10:08 AM Reply

Lol...I wrote this one about a guy I was dating who lived in Chicago (I live in AZ duh) so I just woke up one night and wrote it, these things come to me in my sleep...strangest thing :)

[6] not_a_philosopher 14-Apr-05/2:34 PM Reply

i understand the emotion and have felt it before, but you need to lighten up on the language, and edit it some before it is really good