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Preserves for the basement (Poe Poetry) (Ode) by Bachus
The dry scrape of fragile Fall leaves at the door. A see through ceiling that part times as a floor. Sunlit slits with dust that dare to forever float. The sound of heavy chains, then a far off Tug-boat. Wolf spiders, and ghosts, awash in layers of mildew. An echoless darkness, and things better left untrue. The smell of the Ocean, and a sump-pump that has quit. An axe in the corner, with a spin-wheel to sharpen it. 100 perfectly lined bottles of Jam upon a shelf A 100 years have passed since that December 12th. But if you look again friend, and look up real close. Enough to see through the dust & touch it to your nose. You will see that these preserves are made of no berry. There is something else in there, red, hairy & scary. It looks like sad lips with a mustache trimmed blunt? 'fore a skull in the corner says "That's my jellycunt".

Up the ladder: My chair
Down the ladder: Birth

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.6051183
Overall Rank: 2290
Posted: December 9, 2003 8:42 PM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2003 8:42 PM PST
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[10] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.154 | 10-Dec-03/6:36 PM | Reply
jellycunt.. lol. 10.
[9] dragonfly @ 65.234.193.223 | 11-Dec-03/1:46 PM | Reply
lmao!
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