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Little Bird (Pimple) by Blindpoetry Little Bird
Floating Around
Little Bird
Stay with me; safe and sound
Little Bird
Let your nest be my crown
Don't leave me, little bird
Or the hunters will get you
And you'll be gone without a word
Little Bird
This may seem a little obsurd
Little Bird
I love you -
You have my word...
Up the ladder:
Shouting at dogs
Down the ladder:
True Love
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Posted: December 21, 2003 5:13 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 5:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.807899 Overall Rank: 11049 Comments:
Oh, Little Bird
I don't want to see you dead A feathery pile of green and white turd How I'd miss you shitting on my head
(a)bsurd.
Quite good, the bit about loving the bird at the end is daft. The selfishness to keep the bird for yourself, saying the outside world is worse, praising captivity is rather well written.
"Obsurd" is totally hilarious! 0/10
If you have nothing worth reading to type, then don't "f*cking" type at all.
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I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.