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Little Bird (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
Little Bird Floating Around Little Bird Stay with me; safe and sound Little Bird Let your nest be my crown Don't leave me, little bird Or the hunters will get you And you'll be gone without a word Little Bird This may seem a little obsurd Little Bird I love you - You have my word...

Up the ladder: stab in the dark

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.285714
Weighted score: 4.807899
Overall Rank: 11041
Posted: December 21, 2003 5:13 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 5:13 PM PST
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[6] GregDeEgg @ 66.43.198.38 | 21-Dec-03/6:19 PM | Reply
Cute, simple.

I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.
[5] dragonfly @ 65.234.234.254 | 21-Dec-03/7:36 PM | Reply
Oh, Little Bird
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
[7] richa @ 81.178.224.24 | 23-Dec-03/8:15 AM | Reply
(a)bsurd.

Quite good, the bit about loving the bird at the end is daft. The selfishness to keep the bird for yourself, saying the outside world is worse, praising captivity is rather well written.
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/4:47 PM | Reply
"Obsurd" is totally hilarious! 0/10
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 70.172.227.111 > Edna Sweetlove | 25-May-06/7:51 AM | Reply
If you have nothing worth reading to type, then don't "f*cking" type at all.
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