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Little Bird

by Blindpoetry

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Dec 2003 · 5 comments

Little Bird Floating Around Little Bird Stay with me; safe and sound Little Bird Let your nest be my crown Don't leave me, little bird Or the hunters will get you And you'll be gone without a word Little Bird This may seem a little obsurd Little Bird I love you - You have my word...

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5 comments

[6] GregDeEgg 21-Dec-03/6:19 PM Reply
Cute, simple.

I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.
[5] dragonfly 21-Dec-03/7:36 PM Reply
Oh, Little Bird
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
[7] richa 23-Dec-03/8:15 AM Reply
(a)bsurd.

Quite good, the bit about loving the bird at the end is daft. The selfishness to keep the bird for yourself, saying the outside world is worse, praising captivity is rather well written.
[0] Edna Sweetlove 20-May-06/4:47 PM Reply
"Obsurd" is totally hilarious! 0/10
[n/a] Blindpoetry › Edna Sweetlove 25-May-06/7:51 AM Reply
If you have nothing worth reading to type, then don't "f*cking" type at all.