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@}:- Everyday I send you a rose (Ode) by Prince of Void
@}:- Everyday I send you a rose I'm the bird singing for a rose I'm in love with color of the rose Cause you know you are the rose So be my rose , rose is always a rose I'm wind to hug you softly I'm droprain to kiss you passionately As im flowing through your lips I'm your dreams to bring your spirng I will settle in your sweentness of dreaming You flourish with my love It's i who fly like a dove Soaring in the sky, lying in your eyes O,then tears bend down I sigh today is the day i miss you again So I'll send you a love with a rose

Up the ladder: stab in the dark
Down the ladder: break

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.285714
Weighted score: 4.807899
Overall Rank: 11045
Posted: October 14, 2003 7:14 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 7:14 PM PDT
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.191.61.103 | 14-Oct-03/7:19 PM | Reply
This is simple to see im in love with simple words that express the soul of man who is in contains of desire and just love can rescure him ,so i started to write desirous words upon the mask of days and nights
[5] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 14-Oct-03/7:30 PM | Reply
this is about a rose, right?

"droprain" is a cool word. actually there is an interesting slant to the language here (and a few spelling errors).

I'm guessing you could convey the same meaning and emotion in about a sixth the words.
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