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@}:- Everyday I send you a rose (Ode) by Prince of Void @}:- Everyday I send you a rose
I'm the bird singing for a rose
I'm in love with color of the rose
Cause you know you are the rose
So be my rose , rose is always a rose
I'm wind to hug you softly
I'm droprain to kiss you passionately
As im flowing through your lips
I'm your dreams to bring your spirng
I will settle in your sweentness of dreaming
You flourish with my love
It's i who fly like a dove
Soaring in the sky, lying in your eyes
O,then tears bend down
I sigh today is the day i miss you again
So I'll send you a love with a rose
Up the ladder:
Shouting at dogs
Down the ladder:
break
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Posted: October 14, 2003 7:14 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 7:14 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.807899 Overall Rank: 11051 Comments:
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Prince of Void @ 80.191.61.103
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14-Oct-03/7:19 PM
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This is simple to see im in love with simple words that express the soul of man who is in contains of desire and just love can rescure him ,so i started to write desirous words upon the mask of days and nights
this is about a rose, right?
"droprain" is a cool word. actually there is an interesting slant to the language here (and a few spelling errors). I'm guessing you could convey the same meaning and emotion in about a sixth the words. 241 view(s)
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