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@}:- Everyday I send you a rose (Ode) by Prince of Void

@}:- Everyday I send you a rose I'm the bird singing for a rose I'm in love with color of the rose Cause you know you are the rose So be my rose , rose is always a rose I'm wind to hug you softly I'm droprain to kiss you passionately As im flowing through your lips I'm your dreams to bring your spirng I will settle in your sweentness of dreaming You flourish with my love It's i who fly like a dove Soaring in the sky, lying in your eyes O,then tears bend down I sigh today is the day i miss you again So I'll send you a love with a rose

Shuushin 14-Oct-03/7:30 PM
this is about a rose, right?

"droprain" is a cool word. actually there is an interesting slant to the language here (and a few spelling errors).

I'm guessing you could convey the same meaning and emotion in about a sixth the words.




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