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break (Free verse) by yOum|n
the pressure it's too intense to take don't come any closer i'm afraid i might break crumble.. give me the time to adapt and to change i'm just too fragile to take all these so paralyzed unable to move my soul so delicate i might break to your touch tremble like a leaf in the wind i will become stronger just have faith and if this doesn't kill me i'll emerge no longer feeble just wait i won't break

Up the ladder: True Love
Down the ladder: Screaming a lullaby

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11051
Posted: July 23, 2002 3:22 AM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 3:22 AM PDT
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