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break (Free verse) by yOum|n
the pressure
it's too intense to take
don't come any closer
i'm afraid i might break
crumble..
give me the time
to adapt
and to change
i'm just too fragile
to take all these
so paralyzed
unable to move
my soul
so delicate
i might break
to your touch
tremble like a leaf
in the wind
i will become stronger
just have faith
and if this doesn't kill me
i'll emerge
no longer feeble
just wait
i won't break
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11051
Posted: July 23, 2002 3:22 AM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 3:22 AM PDT
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