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My friend over there (the Mirror) (Lyric) by reo316 I see you there
Sad and all alone
I see you there
Angered to the bone
I see you there
Troubled by the grief
I see you there
Searching for relief
I see you there
Trying to make it through
I see you there
Asking what to do
Seeâ¦.
I know the pain you feel
Problems that make your reel
I know why you must kneel
Every time you must deal
Seeâ¦.
Life is filled with travesty
But where you are I will be
I wonder can they see
That you over there are me
Up the ladder:
Prologue
Down the ladder:
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Posted: December 22, 2003 9:35 PM PST; Last modified: December 22, 2003 9:35 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.4034123 Overall Rank: 3170 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.189.17.188
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22-Dec-03/9:39 PM
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Sure they can, you know, they all have their own society on the other side of the glass, when you're not looking they're partying off their ass, Look closer next time.
I really like how you worded your last two lines. Solid work.
this is okay....but your rhyming .......is slightly annoying..
-megan 137 view(s)
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