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My friend over there (the Mirror)

by reo316

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

I see you there Sad and all alone I see you there Angered to the bone I see you there Troubled by the grief I see you there Searching for relief I see you there Trying to make it through I see you there Asking what to do See…. I know the pain you feel Problems that make your reel I know why you must kneel Every time you must deal See…. Life is filled with travesty But where you are I will be I wonder can they see That you over there are me

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[9] sliver 22-Dec-03/9:39 PM Reply
Sure they can, you know, they all have their own society on the other side of the glass, when you're not looking they're partying off their ass, Look closer next time.
[7] dragonfly 23-Dec-03/11:49 PM Reply
I really like how you worded your last two lines. Solid work.
[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite 21-Jan-05/1:14 PM Reply
this is okay....but your rhyming .......is slightly annoying..
-megan