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My friend over there (the Mirror) (Lyric) by reo316

I see you there Sad and all alone I see you there Angered to the bone I see you there Troubled by the grief I see you there Searching for relief I see you there Trying to make it through I see you there Asking what to do See…. I know the pain you feel Problems that make your reel I know why you must kneel Every time you must deal See…. Life is filled with travesty But where you are I will be I wonder can they see That you over there are me

dragonfly 23-Dec-03/11:49 PM
I really like how you worded your last two lines. Solid work.




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