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Free verse № 78496

The Fire of My Mind

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

Deep down in the depths of my soul Hatred reigns, Burning like the eternal flames of Hell. Death is wanted, Needed, Yearned for. As I lie down to try to put my troubles to rest, I feel the fire in my eyes, Fueled by my emotions, Of Anger, Revenge, and Betrayal. How do I put these feelings aside? Do I act upon them? Do I try to forget them and lock them away in my mind? No. I should use them to their greatest potential. Feed from them the power of influence, Instead of the power of hurt.

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[7] dragonfly 1-Jan-04/10:55 PM Reply
Valium works better.
[7] richa 2-Jan-04/12:52 PM Reply
Beta-blockers better still.