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eat your dinner meats (Free verse) by calliope
flecks of cow flesh flit through the undergrowth, beef we dont need is still beef, indeed. i wasted my lunch 'cuz i was too full. i'm glad there are landfills.

Down the ladder: Oh So Hollow

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8422
Posted: November 23, 2005 3:59 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2005 3:59 AM PST
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[8] ecargo @ 172.137.66.171 | 13-Jan-06/10:12 PM | Reply
"beef we don't need is still beef indeed" nailed it for me.
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