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diamond of love (Free verse) by crwncka1
violator - my true haunting inner demon comes alive in looking into my eyes I see the puppet I now master in freeing you from myself - by letting go of your control knowing all of your lies - and hiding them from you giving all my love up to you without a single need in return even killing myself to find a clear way to see inside you I was left alone to die in the jaws of your ego state with no room left I reach out and touch you underneath my skin and break my world apart to align right with you using creative energy from god to unravel your mysterious being and living my life though your control no longer exists as in knowing all your thoughts in the silence of the moment I chew up all your time for it has no meaning anymore as a picture is painted from my heart of your evil ways with my needs all met in knowing you are no longer there my desire being to find all my trust you hide away as in seeking truth in the moment - all this is real a name I hide behind for protection is what you are to me in wanting to uncover everything about what makes me truly whole your mask I toss away to free my self - away from all your fear leaving you without a choice but to vanquish in my deep insight as in denial of my love finally I have come to full awareness that you creature of my mind where infect blocking me away from what is there for me to experience - love from the very core as in my knowledge & understanding of the power you hold over me your worst fears are faced - as your controlling strings are cut away as you now return to the world of illusion and mirrors - the closet the place where all the devil's tricks I find are locked away forever as in my realization of god I have found nothing to be real and in seeing clear to this reality - I may wash you away along with everything else is not real within me so I may actualize the power that is love - true creative freedom to shape my reality

Up the ladder: Battle Chant
Down the ladder: Apostrophetic Loss

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.571429
Weighted score: 4.8847394
Overall Rank: 9934
Posted: December 11, 2003 10:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2003 10:31 PM PST
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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 12-Dec-03/1:43 AM | Reply
You should put that on the special skills section of your resume. You'd freak'em out in management.
[6] dragonfly @ 65.234.234.150 | 12-Dec-03/10:07 PM | Reply
What did I just read?
[10] The_Third_Isis @ 68.5.128.151 | 13-Dec-03/12:10 AM | Reply
Hello my name is walter and i'am a sheisteeer,a demon, a pshyco,an recovering assasin,a detoxed pilot of god!
"Heeey walter"..we came to beleive...yep.fa la la la la la la la happy unholydays..our men we love them so. ju
[5] kingit @ 67.69.63.162 | 13-Dec-03/12:18 AM | Reply
You're Ming!- I know you're Ming.. the mighty!, the terrible!,..whatever.
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