Im Scared

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Sep 2004 · 6 comments

Im nervous,scared,and sad Im shaking real bad When family die its not funny It makes me feel runny I would love to run But its not fun Im so scared and nobody cares Im so alone Im not home I need someone Someone whos the one Who cares for me When im scared and week Im not having fun Im ready to run Im so scared And nobodys there Where is everyone Were supose to have fun everyones gone and im the only one

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6 comments

[n/a] crystal4 9-Sep-04/5:03 PM Reply

this poem is true

[4] Brandy_n_Cali 9-Sep-04/5:48 PM Reply

RUN & HIDE

[2] Sasha 9-Sep-04/6:37 PM Reply

Any poem that has the words "and nobody cares" or "I need someone" or "I'm the only one" or really any line in this poem, is a hopeless clichÃ©. I'm sorry a member of your family has died. But this poem is terrible

[10] T. Jonathron Remp 9-Sep-04/9:40 PM Reply

"When family die its not funny
It makes me feel runny"

Classic. You call for seriousness, and then, on the very next line, say that you "feel runny."

Dynamite parody. 10.

[5] LintyWeenis 11-Sep-04/3:54 PM Reply

I like how you took a serious topic and kind of made it into this elementary rhyming thing (and I'm not one to talk). It'll be a 5 for me.

[n/a] crystal4 26-May-05/11:51 AM Reply

thank you all for yor nice comments.