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What I really needed (Haiku) by Shardik
Was for you to love something in me besides you. Once, upon a time.
Up the ladder: Forest Rain
Down the ladder: No Aegis
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.875
Weighted score: 5.7732067
Overall Rank: 1750
Posted: December 12, 2003 2:02 AM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2003 2:02 AM PST
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[n/a] ==Doylum @ 80.225.182.113 | 12-Dec-03/9:13 AM | Reply
have you got writters bloke?
you haven't written a poem for at least 2 minutes!!!

[n/a] ==Doylum @ 80.225.174.55 | 12-Dec-03/9:15 AM | Reply
block even
[10] Caducus @ 195.92.168.166 | 12-Dec-03/1:58 PM | Reply
I think i know what your're wrting of here.

Dad?

You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride.

I'm moved 10
[7] dragonfly @ 65.234.234.150 | 12-Dec-03/10:10 PM | Reply
Nice and simple.
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