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What I really needed (Haiku) by Shardik

Was for you to love something in me besides you. Once, upon a time.

Caducus 12-Dec-03/1:58 PM
I think i know what your're wrting of here.

Dad?

You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride.

I'm moved 10




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