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She is A Lover Deep Within (Lyric) by Joe-joe
She is a lover deep within A song still unsung An untold breath not yet released With notes that cannot express But just sigh as she does And I hear a symphony From that breath that blows my way Chorus: She is a lover deep within And I must go her way Her touch sleeps peacefully in tender hands When strokes from which I understand That day we meet in sweet embrace And I am one with her. Chorus: She is a lover deep within And I must go her way Now a man of my stature Should not be so soft And I am not inclined to bend as such But this woman, you see Is a lover deep within And I am not what I seem to be And no longer shall play a fool. Chorus: She is a lover deep within And I must go her way

Up the ladder: Thankless
Down the ladder: Insolence

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2618
Posted: December 10, 2003 4:12 AM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2003 4:12 AM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.154 | 10-Dec-03/6:38 PM | Reply
sounds like a million other love songs joe.. cmon now..
[7] dragonfly @ 65.234.193.223 | 11-Dec-03/1:13 PM | Reply
cutesies
[8] Caducus @ 195.92.168.166 | 12-Dec-03/2:12 PM | Reply
For your young years you are a fine writer.

I am mr pig too joe joe.
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