replying on Always by hobojo
19 Dec 2008, 2:14 PM
Your version is much better, yes. Changes the meaning a bit though. I know I am a terrible writer, but it is one of the many things I am trying to get better at. Thanks for taking the time to write your thoughts, I always enjoy reading your poems.
replying on Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer
4 Dec 2008, 4:33 PM
Wow, parallel lives...
replying on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote
4 Dec 2008, 4:23 PM
I again come back to your poem... it really captures my current state, evaluating my inability to engage in life - thank you for writing this.
on Marrakech Watercolours by Caducus
1 Dec 2008, 6:00 PM
Wonderful
on Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina
13 Nov 2008, 6:24 PM
Karma can really bite
replying on Anorexia is good for the soul by hobojo
13 Nov 2008, 6:22 PM
Anorexia being the opposite of an addiction to food, an addiction to being thin, which has been a part of my world with this self hate, not being desired blah blah stupid
replying on Anorexia is good for the soul by hobojo
13 Nov 2008, 6:21 PM
I was comparing anorexia to an addiction to food and that starvation of this sort would be good for my soul - sorry to use the word offensively if I did so...
on The Deepest Depths by chesty82
10 Nov 2008, 5:50 PM
You have captured my year...
replying on One of the guys by hobojo
1 Nov 2008, 4:46 PM
Sorry to post such personal poems - i made everything awkward in my group of friends and he is avoiding me - he did no wrong -
on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy
6 Sep 2008, 4:07 PM
My grandmother sits in my dad's old chair... this is very good and reminds me we all share such similar stories in life
replying on Time to leap by hobojo
6 Sep 2008, 1:02 AM
Thank you - I agree with everything you recommended
on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote
12 Aug 2008, 12:15 AM
This was my weekend...
replying on Fading Love by hobojo
18 Nov 2007, 2:01 AM
Thanks
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8
5 Sep 2007, 5:19 PM
In all of my artistic endeavors, art, music, cooking, and writing, I do so for myself. It is an outlet, it cleanses my emotions, it teaches me something new, and it results in a creation. If someone else enjoys and benefits, wonderful. Ignore him.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
on Bowling For Turpentine by horus8
29 Jul 2004, 10:01 PM
There is so much more wrong with Americans and their perceptions of what life is all about - oh do tell more.
replying on Hurt never dies by hobojo
7 Nov 2003, 8:31 AM
Surrounded by calm - when your world is in turmoil but the world goes on - the feeling when you can't function but all others do.
on Never Love A Poet by Caducus
7 Nov 2003, 8:06 AM
This reflects the communication barrier I have been dealing with lately - this resonates with regret - something I try never to feel - 10
on One Sided Love by Caducus
24 Sep 2003, 11:28 AM
timing is essential with expressing words like love...