poemranker ::One Sided Love by Caducus

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Haiku № 61845

One Sided Love

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Aug 2003 · Edited 24 Sep 2003 · 4 comments

Tell her you love her, And feel the start of the end, Her kiss feels lighter.

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4 comments

[10] <~> 22-Aug-03/2:41 PM Reply
nicely done, sir
[n/a] Caducus › <~> 22-Aug-03/3:34 PM Reply
you helped big time (finger space)
[8] hobojo 24-Sep-03/11:28 AM Reply
timing is essential with expressing words like love...
[4] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 24-Sep-03/2:59 PM Reply
I would say this poem is somewhat elliptical, if you don't mind my saying so. -4-