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One Sided Love (Haiku) by Caducus Tell her you love her,
And feel the start of the end,
Her kiss feels lighter.
Up the ladder:
Breaking the wind (An Odenelle to Pirgaytes)
Down the ladder:
Sand Palace
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Posted: August 22, 2003 3:26 AM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2003 8:13 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.2222223 Overall Rank: 958 Comments:
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22-Aug-03/2:41 PM
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nicely done, sir
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Caducus @ 195.92.168.167
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22-Aug-03/3:34 PM
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you helped big time (finger space)
timing is essential with expressing words like love...
I would say this poem is somewhat elliptical, if you don't mind my saying so. -4-
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