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My Dad's Armchair.

Member since 2005 · Posted 5 Sep 2005 · 10 comments

Oh how my Dad loved his armchair. His treasured prize. It heard his blues and embraced his sighs. He'd come home from work, and plop in exhaustion, on an old tattered, worn out, cushion. We would all linger near, til he waved us over. He'd tell us a story, until it was supper. In the evening he'd sit, and watch us all play, and when it was bedtime, by his armchair, we'd pray. Many a time, I saw my Dad cry. He would hold my Mother, and say," This too will pass by." Sometimes, if I was out late, He'd be there waiting. His fingers drumming, watching the drive yard, anticipating. When my Dad passed away, I sat in his chair, I closed my eyes, and felt him there. I learned how much, the heart can bear. Seeing my Dad, sitting in his armchair. Dedicated to my Dad, Buster.

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[10] 7!3 5-Sep-05/5:39 AM Reply
lovely...
[n/a] Bethy › 7!3 5-Sep-05/2:47 PM Reply
thank you for your comment, it was very nice of you...:) Bethy
[9] ay deee 5-Sep-05/7:19 AM Reply
i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
[n/a] Bethy › ay deee 5-Sep-05/2:50 PM Reply
Thank you ay deee, its a great feeling isn't it...simple things are very good...:) Bethy
[6] Tintagiles 7-Sep-05/8:03 PM Reply
Hmm. Get rid of the initial 'Oh'. Fifth stanza, get rid of 'and'. There are a few other rhythmic things I'd think could be changed, but can't think how. The end of each line does not require a punctuation mark.
[10] 7!3 › Tintagiles 8-Sep-05/5:30 AM Reply
i think it's lovely the way it is, though...
[n/a] ALChemy 15-Feb-06/4:17 PM Reply
Hey Bethy good to see you back. Happy Valentines day.
[n/a] Bethy › ALChemy 15-Feb-06/4:21 PM Reply
Hi Al good to see you too, Happy Valentines to you my friend :) :) Bethy
[10] hobojo 6-Sep-08/4:07 PM Reply
My grandmother sits in my dad's old chair... this is very good and reminds me we all share such similar stories in life
[n/a] Bethy › hobojo 30-Sep-08/10:13 AM Reply
Thank you hobojo. I now own my Dads chair and I am sitting in it now. It is my own personal way of staying close to him and all that he has done and given me in life. I have gotten hugs, scoldings,prayers and spankings all from that chair. It is a huge part of my history, and a bigger part of who I am today.
Hugs :) Bethy