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The Deepest Depths

by chesty82

Member since 2008 · Posted 10 Nov 2008 · 2 comments

you ask me how i am i smile and gently lie inside i am just screaming my smile is my cry my laugh is fake and hollow my happiness is rare eachday is just the same and it is too much to bare my tears are always hidden but inside they drown my soul for me true loves forbidden and it keeps me far from whole my heart is like the ocean pure, deep and blue crushing my emotions like the deepest depths can do i rest now in the darkness on the seabed floor i pray that you will save me and bring me back to shore

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1 vote so far. Yours would make 2.1 vote so far

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[10] hobojo 10-Nov-08/5:50 PM Reply
You have captured my year...
[n/a] chesty82 › hobojo 11-Nov-08/6:59 AM Reply
Your not alone then, cause it has been my last 8 years. Thanks for the vote too