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did I already post this haha (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Call me angel at night
Just don't tempt me
Far from earth do spirits wander
Begging to be brought back to solid ground
Begging to be happy
Beggin to have a home
Begging for love
These spirits know not what they dream,
Nor who they should love
What should they trust?
This tarnished hope for truth?
Or the sinful tides of others?
What or who should they be?
What happens when the spirit dies
And the body lives on?
Are they banished to a life of loss?
How do these angels of pain live,
In such a world of torment and uncertainty?
Can they live with out stopping to grieve?
Why do these angels search when there is no answer?
Or any one to hear their prayers, no good Samaritan?
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Posted: May 15, 2009 11:15 AM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2009 11:15 AM PDT
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