on Fine Line by sliver
13 Nov 2008, 6:28 PM
Wish I had a sense of my fine line...
on Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina
13 Nov 2008, 6:24 PM
Karma can really bite
on The Deepest Depths by chesty82
10 Nov 2008, 5:50 PM
You have captured my year...
on Killing me. by Plasticgirlwithgun
6 Dec 2002, 8:54 AM
Love the end
on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy
6 Sep 2008, 4:07 PM
My grandmother sits in my dad's old chair... this is very good and reminds me we all share such similar stories in life
on Sunset Hands by Bachus
18 Jul 2003, 7:47 AM
We are always able if we are aware.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 12:32 PM
I agree with Horus - good to leave out the time - they usually show up after noon anyway...
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 9:41 AM
I love this one.
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
24 Jan 2003, 12:38 PM
Funny
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 9:46 AM
And men say they will never understand women...
on One Sided Love by Caducus
24 Sep 2003, 11:28 AM
timing is essential with expressing words like love...
on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote
12 Aug 2008, 12:15 AM
This was my weekend...
on Never Love A Poet by Caducus
7 Nov 2003, 8:06 AM
This reflects the communication barrier I have been dealing with lately - this resonates with regret - something I try never to feel - 10
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2004, 6:16 PM
We can all relate to this - I felt this way two years ago - first real boyfriend - I have now spent the past year with the best boyfriend ever imagineable - reflect on how much you have learned from your previous relationship and move on - liars never change - you do not deserve this -
Most obvious corrections:
S1L1 - They are
S1L3 - Sit
S2L2 - out my heart
S2L3 - it into
S4L3 - kill dunno
S7L3 - without
Most obvious corrections:
S1L1 - They are
S1L3 - Sit
S2L2 - out my heart
S2L3 - it into
S4L3 - kill dunno
S7L3 - without
on Bowling For Turpentine by horus8
29 Jul 2004, 10:01 PM
There is so much more wrong with Americans and their perceptions of what life is all about - oh do tell more.
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8
5 Sep 2007, 5:19 PM
In all of my artistic endeavors, art, music, cooking, and writing, I do so for myself. It is an outlet, it cleanses my emotions, it teaches me something new, and it results in a creation. If someone else enjoys and benefits, wonderful. Ignore him.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
on Marrakech Watercolours by Caducus
1 Dec 2008, 6:00 PM
Wonderful