Re: Dust by Caducus |
2-Dec-02/11:28 AM |
I enjoyed the last stanza
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Re: Killing me. by Plasticgirlwithgun |
6-Dec-02/8:54 AM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Dec-02/9:41 AM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Dec-02/9:46 AM |
And men say they will never understand women...
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regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jan-03/12:32 PM |
I agree with Horus - good to leave out the time - they usually show up after noon anyway...
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Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik |
24-Jan-03/12:38 PM |
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Re: Federales by Bachus |
18-Jul-03/7:41 AM |
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Re: Sunset Hands by Bachus |
18-Jul-03/7:47 AM |
We are always able if we are aware.
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Re: One Sided Love by Caducus |
24-Sep-03/11:28 AM |
timing is essential with expressing words like love...
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Re: Never Love A Poet by Caducus |
7-Nov-03/8:06 AM |
This reflects the communication barrier I have been dealing with lately - this resonates with regret - something I try never to feel - 10
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Re: Saturn by Bachus |
29-Jul-04/9:51 PM |
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Re: Bowling For Turpentine by horus8 |
29-Jul-04/10:01 PM |
There is so much more wrong with Americans and their perceptions of what life is all about - oh do tell more.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Aug-04/6:16 PM |
We can all relate to this - I felt this way two years ago - first real boyfriend - I have now spent the past year with the best boyfriend ever imagineable - reflect on how much you have learned from your previous relationship and move on - liars never change - you do not deserve this -
Most obvious corrections:
S1L1 - They are
S1L3 - Sit
S2L2 - out my heart
S2L3 - it into
S4L3 - kill dunno
S7L3 - without
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Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
5-Sep-07/5:19 PM |
In all of my artistic endeavors, art, music, cooking, and writing, I do so for myself. It is an outlet, it cleanses my emotions, it teaches me something new, and it results in a creation. If someone else enjoys and benefits, wonderful. Ignore him.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
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Re: About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote |
12-Aug-08/12:15 AM |
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Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
6-Sep-08/4:07 PM |
My grandmother sits in my dad's old chair... this is very good and reminds me we all share such similar stories in life
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Re: The Deepest Depths by chesty82 |
10-Nov-08/5:50 PM |
You have captured my year...
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Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
13-Nov-08/6:24 PM |
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Re: Fine Line by sliver |
13-Nov-08/6:28 PM |
Wish I had a sense of my fine line...
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Re: Marrakech Watercolours by Caducus |
1-Dec-08/6:00 PM |
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