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Killing me. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun
Make my eyes cry Make my heart break Make my arm bleed Tell me you hate me Think I am shit Then tell me you love me Never meant that You just take it back Fuck you and fuck your scence I want you to die What I want I always get.
Up the ladder: Mist and Moonlight
Down the ladder: Dinner Menu
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6078
Posted: December 5, 2002 9:24 PM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 9:24 PM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 6-Dec-02/6:45 AM | Reply
Go Gladiator girl save up $100 and get the knobhead, you saved this by the ballistic ending
[9] hobojo @ 166.94.9.205 | 6-Dec-02/8:54 AM | Reply
Love the end
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun @ 172.144.171.87 > hobojo | 6-Dec-02/9:14 AM | Reply
So do I.
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Dec-02/11:49 AM | Reply
what? fatter? you date rich guys and you're a spoiled brat...you watch ricky schroeder in silver spoon reruns...ha!ha! and the truth is blood makes you queasy...great poem! 9.h
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun @ 64.12.96.139 > Bachus | 6-Dec-02/12:43 PM | Reply
Wow....that was a complament.
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