poemranker ::Killing me. by Plasticgirlwithgun

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Free verse № 28738

Killing me.

by Plasticgirlwithgun

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Dec 2002 · 5 comments

Make my eyes cry Make my heart break Make my arm bleed Tell me you hate me Think I am shit Then tell me you love me Never meant that You just take it back Fuck you and fuck your scence I want you to die What I want I always get.

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[7] Caducus 6-Dec-02/6:45 AM Reply
Go Gladiator girl save up $100 and get the knobhead, you saved this by the ballistic ending
[9] hobojo 6-Dec-02/8:54 AM Reply
Love the end
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › hobojo 6-Dec-02/9:14 AM Reply
So do I.
[9] Bachus 6-Dec-02/11:49 AM Reply
what? fatter? you date rich guys and you're a spoiled brat...you watch ricky schroeder in silver spoon reruns...ha!ha! and the truth is blood makes you queasy...great poem! 9.h
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › Bachus 6-Dec-02/12:43 PM Reply
Wow....that was a complament.