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Mist and Moonlight (Free verse) by jdsnyd
Your feet never touch the earth
In dreams you walk in soft mist of celestial descent
Caressed lovingly along the moonlit lines of your skin
Gentle winds stir your hair and garments
Like an apparition I watch you, and I become...
The mist that orbits and carries you across nocturnal fields
The moonlight falling on the lines of your form
Framed and placed on the walls of memory
The wind that moves through your hair and gown
The careful wisp of warm air moving over your mouth
Down your long slender neck to the nape
Where I rest and breath in your bouquet
In dreams I am unrestrained by this anatomy
Released to love you as you should be loved
The symbiotic entity enouncing your beauty
The warm breeze embracing you
The mist and moonlight that you walk in
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6077
Posted: November 15, 2002 5:58 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2002 5:58 PM PST
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